Below is a photo of the bird that inspired me to pen the poem, that I had included in the earlier post, and which I am reproducing below.
My Feathered Friend
I spied thee, my
feathered friend,
Pecking furiously at thy
perceived foe,
Thy hard beak pounding
at thy reflected self;
It too had its head
thrust to the mirrored pane
With its chocolate-hued
wings spread from its dark body
And red-rimmed eyes
staring, unblinking, unyielding;
Aye, thy foe, postured
much like thyself, was ready for battle,
Returning peck for peck
with like ferocity, like enmity.
Words, if used
appropriately, have the power to create pictures in your mind. Words such as
`saw', `hitting', `bent forward' and `standing' only convey a general idea.
There is very little that one can draw from such words; there is a lack of
symbolism, emotions and/or characteristics of the protagonist.
o The word `spied'
gives one the idea that the one being viewed is unaware of being watched.
o `Pounding' displays a
greater force being exerted than a mere `hitting'. Here, one may view the
action as aggressive and hence, the bird could be seen as being angry or upset.
o `Thrust' is a
beautiful word that indicates a deliberate, intentioned, attempt to push the
head forward. This action allows the reader to appreciate the fact that the
bird is purposely looking closely at the window pane, observing closely something
that has caught its attention. It gives the bird `life' and it becomes an
entity that can think, that can feel.
o `Postured' gives one an idea that the bird has
a certain attitude, a certain bearing that indicates a specific emotion. In
this case, based on context, we know that the posture is aggressive, that the
bird is positioning itself in a way that shows it is ready to fight.
- What is the feeling that the bird is
experiencing? Why is it feeling that way?
The bird sees another bird in the
`mirrored pane' and thinks it is a foe, and hence, it feels hatred, leading to
its rage against the supposed foe. It is hostile toward the bird and hence, is
ready to fight it
- Is the feeling justified?
No, it is not, since what it sees in
the `mirrored pane' is a reflection of itself. There is no other bird there; it
is actually seeing itself on the other side.
- Can the bird's reaction be extended to the
human experience?
Yes, very often, we project our
feelings of animosity toward non-existing entities. We create these entities in
our mind, imagining a foe where there is none. We work ourselves up in a fury
when there is no reason to be furious. These entities, if we look closely, are
really very much like ourselves.
- What lesson may we, as humans, derive from the
bird's reaction?
The reflection of the bird in the
mirror need not be an image of a foe, but it could be a reflection of the
negative feelings a person may have, stemming from prejudice, arrogance or a
sense of insecurity. These feelings are meaningless and unproductive. We end up
harming ourselves ultimately and all for nothing, since there is no real
threat.
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